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I look at your face, and the once black and white picture
suddenly gets colored with the richest palette a soul can see
I try to realise how beautiful you look
and how beautiful the world looks because of you

I listen to you calling my name, and the once sad melody
suddenly becomes the happiest harmony a spirit can hear
I try to understand how happy you sound
and how you replaced those wails with laughters

I feel your hand, and the once freezing flesh of mine
suddenly starts warming up by the flames of your essence
I try to comprehend how alive you feel
and how you were able to revive a once baren core

I'm afraid of this happiness I feel
I'm afraid of you
but how I miss you
how I long to hold you in my arms
how I long to play with your hair
while you're resting your head on my lap...

I love you...
I'm not afraid to say it anymore...
I love you...
I love you...
I love you...
I'm free at last...
and I love you...
I am not afraid anymore...
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Ladyspeed Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2007
I love this, especially the line 'I'm afraid of this happiness I feel'
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2007  Professional Writer
thank you :worship:
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Prtoujours Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
:) wa akhiran ! :blowkiss: don't be afraid... enjoy the happiness :heart:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2007  Professional Writer
I will try...
but I will enjoy it wisely from now on...
not in the stupid blind way I used to...
deyman fi khatt raj3a...
no matter what...
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Prtoujours Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
:)
eh eh.. 7fazo mni7 la khat el raj3a..
Bass you deserve to be happy Fletchy ! :blowkiss:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2007  Professional Writer
karjit mayy dima...
karjit mayy...
it's about time enneh koun 7fezto...
enno el takraar bi 3allim el 7maar...
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JaZzaMoLiA Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007
The last part turned to be Cheeeeesyyy! But I like it! :thumbsup:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007  Professional Writer
actually, I don't like it...
it ALL sounds cheesy...
as I said, I don't identify in not sad texts...
maybe it's because I got used to writing about pain only
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JaZzaMoLiA Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007
But Wissam, You write great in non sad texts.

Don't choose pessimism over optimism. From the way I see you, you're a cheerful funny person. Don't close the walls on yourself.
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2007  Professional Writer
I'm trying...
but still I find happy texts cheesy, overzelous (in a negative way) and kind of weak... in comparison with the sad ones...
there's no true emotion as sadness...
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JaZzaMoLiA Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2007
Bullshit! There is no such thing as true emotion and non true ones. Emotions and feelings are us, are what they make us.
And I see you choosing to be sad.. and I wonder why!
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2007  Professional Writer
I don't choose to be sad
nowadays I choose to be happy
all I am saying is that when one is happy and he writes about happy stuff, those stuff seem heik kind of lame in comparison to the sad things written
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chrysromeo Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007
good for you if you're not afraid
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007  Professional Writer
:blowkiss:
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Lynnelle Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007
it sure is positive and is so beautiful :hug:

:blowkiss:

well done sweetie :clap:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007  Professional Writer
I dunno
I love the fact that I am feeling this way, but what was written lacks something for me...
maybe it lacks me...
I dunno, maybe I have written about sadness and pain so long I stopped recognizing myself when I wrote anything else...
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Lynnelle Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2007
Then it's about time to recognize the new feelings the happy numbness ;)

:hug: :blowkiss: 2ed ell dinni :hug:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2007  Professional Writer
inshalla kheir lynelle
inshalla kheir
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Lynnelle Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2007
:hug: :hug: :hug:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2007  Professional Writer
:blowkiss: :kiss: :blowkiss:
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balawalashi Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2007
Finally!! :hug:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007  Professional Writer
eh bass... khalass mashi...
positive thinking... :( :)
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Chaldemone Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2007
:wow: Beautifully written. :liquisoft:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007  Professional Writer
thank you :embarassed:
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Chaldemone Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007
Aww.. You're welcome. :hug:
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