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I look at your face, and the once black and white picture
suddenly gets colored with the richest palette a soul can see
I try to realise how beautiful you look
and how beautiful the world looks because of you

I listen to you calling my name, and the once sad melody
suddenly becomes the happiest harmony a spirit can hear
I try to understand how happy you sound
and how you replaced those wails with laughters

I feel your hand, and the once freezing flesh of mine
suddenly starts warming up by the flames of your essence
I try to comprehend how alive you feel
and how you were able to revive a once baren core

I'm afraid of this happiness I feel
I'm afraid of you
but how I miss you
how I long to hold you in my arms
how I long to play with your hair
while you're resting your head on my lap...

I love you...
I'm not afraid to say it anymore...
I love you...
I love you...
I love you...
I'm free at last...
and I love you...
I am not afraid anymore...
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:iconladyspeed:
I love this, especially the line 'I'm afraid of this happiness I feel'
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fletchergull Nov 7, 2007  Professional Writer
thank you :worship:
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Prtoujours Oct 19, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
:) wa akhiran ! :blowkiss: don't be afraid... enjoy the happiness :heart:
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fletchergull Oct 19, 2007  Professional Writer
I will try...
but I will enjoy it wisely from now on...
not in the stupid blind way I used to...
deyman fi khatt raj3a...
no matter what...
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Prtoujours Oct 19, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
:)
eh eh.. 7fazo mni7 la khat el raj3a..
Bass you deserve to be happy Fletchy ! :blowkiss:
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fletchergull Oct 19, 2007  Professional Writer
karjit mayy dima...
karjit mayy...
it's about time enneh koun 7fezto...
enno el takraar bi 3allim el 7maar...
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:iconjazzamolia:
The last part turned to be Cheeeeesyyy! But I like it! :thumbsup:
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fletchergull Oct 17, 2007  Professional Writer
actually, I don't like it...
it ALL sounds cheesy...
as I said, I don't identify in not sad texts...
maybe it's because I got used to writing about pain only
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:iconjazzamolia:
But Wissam, You write great in non sad texts.

Don't choose pessimism over optimism. From the way I see you, you're a cheerful funny person. Don't close the walls on yourself.
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fletchergull Oct 18, 2007  Professional Writer
I'm trying...
but still I find happy texts cheesy, overzelous (in a negative way) and kind of weak... in comparison with the sad ones...
there's no true emotion as sadness...
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