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No...
you will not be the source of my tears...
you will not be the reason of my sadness...
you will not be a bad memory...
you're too smiling, too happy and too beautiful to be any of those...
No...
I will not force myself not to remember you...
I will not look away whenever I bump into you somewhere...
I will not talk badly of you...
you're invading my memory, addicting my eyes and sweetening my mouth...
yet...
No...
I will not remain your friend...
I will not see you everyday...
I will not be around whenever you need me...
cos I still love you...                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             
no...
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Forkosh Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2008
Touched my heart .. Literally :cry:

thank you for this beautiful piece!
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2008  Professional Writer
thank YOU for finding it fit enough for your comment and your fav... :blowkiss:
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:iconforkosh:
Forkosh Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2008
You definitely Earned it :)
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2008  Professional Writer
you're just too nice... :)
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ScreamingFingers Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2008
I really like this. :)
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2008  Professional Writer
thanks. :)
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Ladyspeed Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008
I agree with Lynnelle in theory 'just another picture'... with time the memories will fade naturally and they won't be as overpowering as they are now...well one can hope can't they?
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Professional Writer
with time...
with time...
with time...
time...
time...
time...
:(
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Lynnelle Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008
bta2riff shoo....just soar high up so high soar till there are no tears anymore...soar up high till the memory is just a memory...just another picture...

:clap: well done on this piece it touched me deeply :hug: :hug: :hug:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Professional Writer
lina
I don't remember writing this piece...
I was shocked it even existed and I had comments on it...
I read the comments, then read the piece and it was as if reading someone else's piece... :S
weird... :S
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Lynnelle Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
it is weird but beautiful!!!!!

we need to talk about this ;)

not remembering writing this piece?? weird :confused:

btw will I see you tomorrow?
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008  Professional Writer
ma ra7 etla3 tomorrow gotta go pick my sister from the airport...
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Lynnelle Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2008
ok laken tell me when u will I miss u :hug:
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PavSys Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008
I like this poem. :D
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Professional Writer
thanks...
although I don't remember writing it myself :S
I guess that night I was totally wasted when I wrote it... cos I woke up the second day and was shocked I had comments on a piece I've never heard of in my life :P
thanks again...
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PavSys Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
Being wasted is when you get creative! ;)
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008  Professional Writer
but the least i could do is remember writing the piece :S
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newborn-butterfly Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2008
:hug: once again you write something that cuts to the core of me.... perhaps your parallel theory is true
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Professional Writer
thanks...
although I don't remember writing it myself :S
I guess that night I was totally wasted when I wrote it... cos I woke up the second day and was shocked I had comments on a piece I've never heard of in my life :P
thanks again...
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newborn-butterfly Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
hmm... maybe you were tapping into my emotions and you had no control over it, you had to write it?
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Prtoujours Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:)
And when love will fade away... because hopefully it will..
will you consider the friendship part again?
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Professional Writer
when love fades away...
if love fades away...
it's because you stop seeing the one you love...
if you two become friends, you'll fall in love with the same person over and over again...
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Prtoujours Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Unless they changed.. or unless you change..

But people don't really change ma hek? :(
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