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When talks become superficial
And feelings turn artificial
When you think twice before you call
Then do, yet say nothing at all
When you feel empty all the time
And all your poems start to rime
When you miss someone who's not there
Or is around, yet does not care
When you try hard to make it last
Yet see yourself part of the past
When you fail the tricks in your sleeve
Then it is surely time to leave...
when it's time
it's time... :(
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Forkosh Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2008
uh! :cry:
u read me out loud!
Amazing as always!
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2008  Professional Writer
what can I say more than thanks a gazillion?
well, thanks alot more... :blush:
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newborn-butterfly Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2007
reminds me of Fix You by Coldplay
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2007  Professional Writer
now that you've said it...
it does to me too :)
except that in fix you, the guy wants to fix the person he loves...
I know that it's impossible, so I will simply leave...
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newborn-butterfly Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2007
lol it's just the smooth way you go through everything, matches the whole bit about, if you feel so tired but you can't sleep, if you love someone but it goes to waste bit lol
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chrysromeo Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2007
hey this is so true... but you know what?... even when you know it's time to leave, you never leave because what you KNOW and what you FEEL are different things... at least that's what happens to me, I can never leave and I keep remaining and feeling frustrated when there's obviously no way no solution for that relationship... and I keep seeing them together in my mind and it's tormenting... and still I can't leave...
I'm like that... I must be deeply disappointed to stop caring about a love that matters to me and be able to turn away from it...
but you're a happier one if you can move on :thumbsup:
go ahead spread your wings fletchergull, cause this seagull boy can't do the same...
good luck with a new love, that will be better :nod:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2007  Professional Writer
when you live alone for a while, loneliness stops being that scary...
so between loving someone and aching or staying alone, it becomes obvious to you that you're better off...
you've lost a lot before...
you've lost a big part of yourself before already... so you start using your brain so you don't lose anymore of you...
so you just fly...
new love?
day after day, I keep discovering that I am better off...
the more I meet lovers, the more I love my shark fish more ;)
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chrysromeo Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2007
yeah, I'm not scared of being alone, I just need to have love too much - it's not about not being alone, it's about being in love... and loving someone totally, not just jumping from one person to another
good for you if you are better off
and if you find lovers every day...
it doesn't apply to me though
and I'm not fast to get detached from an attachment, unless they disappoint me
I like to meet new people, but I prefer to find depth in a relationship
you say you're so better off, yet your poems are desolate and lamenting... whatever, if you're actually cheerful, no problem then
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2007  Professional Writer
I don't fall in love easily...
I don't find someone to love easily...
and I surely do not rebound from one to another...
I just prefer to stay alone and love and miss an image of the lover I want, than love someone who's going to hurt me over and over again...
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chrysromeo Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2007
that makes sense... of course
when there's too much hurting there's no remaining - probably there's a degree of how much we allow someone to harm us before we realize it's no good anymore to keep that relationship
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2007  Professional Writer
or maybe this person didn't hurt you enough to say good bye but you learned from previous experiences that if it starts like this then it will surely lead into a heartache and therefore you're better off...
chat échaudé craint l'eau froide ;)
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chrysromeo Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2007
actually it started me talking about myself because I found so much of my own emotions in it...
but the truth about remaining or leaving is that affection must always be fuelled, fed, increased by exchange and communication, kept close and cared for... otherwise it fades out by itself... though you know the main point is that when it's time it's time and that's that, and before it's time you can't decide it's time even if it's time already... so that means it might not be time even if it should seem so, it's just time when it's time and no sooner and no later
ok I talked about it too much :lol:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2007  Professional Writer
you do realise that we are discussing the same topic in two deviation discussions (it's time and l'enfer et les autres), and in each one we are taking a different stand...
right?
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chrysromeo Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2007
but I don't want to become boring, after all it was your poem and here I am talking about myself, that's selfish...
probably we all keep hoping and that makes us remain
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chrysromeo Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2007
yeah, probably the previous experiences are making it much worse... knowing how it always ends and there's no chance for anything - and I've not come yet to the point where I would be given enough reasons to stay, therefore I can't leave until I'm sure of it and they are not trying to keep me around, cause if I get positive signs too then I remain hoping it might just be better... and I might be wrong again and I already know it somehow, or suspect it
I always leave when I feel there's no love from the person... that's the most important reason to make me go
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PavSys Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2007
This is a cool one!
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2007  Professional Writer
thanks :)
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Lynnelle Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2007
and then it's time to leave....can't you just float??

:hug: :hug: this is actually mesmerizing!! I love the image!!!!!
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2007  Professional Writer
float and do what?
no it's better to leave...
stagnating is a killer...
routine is a killer...
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Lynnelle Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2007
yes but leaving is a cowardly action....
you told me that ages ago...remember??
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2007  Professional Writer
when there's nothing to give or take anymore...
it's better to leave...
to another land, another place...
another love...
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Lynnelle Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2007
i don't think you heard me perfectly :fork:

I will make it clear soon!!! if it's a new love maybe it's even better...as long as it's a new beginning :hug:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2007  Professional Writer
no more...
NO MORE...
I'm ok alone...
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Lynnelle Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2007
stoufil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lak kiss ekhet el see3aa el mni7ki fiyaaa!!! seriously i will slap you when I see you!!
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2007  Professional Writer
try your best...
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Alva-V Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2007
its time..
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2007  Professional Writer
yes it is...
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