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When talks become superficial
And feelings turn artificial
When you think twice before you call
Then do, yet say nothing at all
When you feel empty all the time
And all your poems start to rime
When you miss someone who's not there
Or is around, yet does not care
When you try hard to make it last
Yet see yourself part of the past
When you fail the tricks in your sleeve
Then it is surely time to leave...
when it's time
it's time... :(
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Forkosh Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2008
uh! :cry:
u read me out loud!
Amazing as always!
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2008  Professional Writer
what can I say more than thanks a gazillion?
well, thanks alot more... :blush:
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newborn-butterfly Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2007
reminds me of Fix You by Coldplay
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2007  Professional Writer
now that you've said it...
it does to me too :)
except that in fix you, the guy wants to fix the person he loves...
I know that it's impossible, so I will simply leave...
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newborn-butterfly Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2007
lol it's just the smooth way you go through everything, matches the whole bit about, if you feel so tired but you can't sleep, if you love someone but it goes to waste bit lol
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chrysromeo Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2007
hey this is so true... but you know what?... even when you know it's time to leave, you never leave because what you KNOW and what you FEEL are different things... at least that's what happens to me, I can never leave and I keep remaining and feeling frustrated when there's obviously no way no solution for that relationship... and I keep seeing them together in my mind and it's tormenting... and still I can't leave...
I'm like that... I must be deeply disappointed to stop caring about a love that matters to me and be able to turn away from it...
but you're a happier one if you can move on :thumbsup:
go ahead spread your wings fletchergull, cause this seagull boy can't do the same...
good luck with a new love, that will be better :nod:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2007  Professional Writer
when you live alone for a while, loneliness stops being that scary...
so between loving someone and aching or staying alone, it becomes obvious to you that you're better off...
you've lost a lot before...
you've lost a big part of yourself before already... so you start using your brain so you don't lose anymore of you...
so you just fly...
new love?
day after day, I keep discovering that I am better off...
the more I meet lovers, the more I love my shark fish more ;)
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chrysromeo Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2007
yeah, I'm not scared of being alone, I just need to have love too much - it's not about not being alone, it's about being in love... and loving someone totally, not just jumping from one person to another
good for you if you are better off
and if you find lovers every day...
it doesn't apply to me though
and I'm not fast to get detached from an attachment, unless they disappoint me
I like to meet new people, but I prefer to find depth in a relationship
you say you're so better off, yet your poems are desolate and lamenting... whatever, if you're actually cheerful, no problem then
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2007  Professional Writer
I don't fall in love easily...
I don't find someone to love easily...
and I surely do not rebound from one to another...
I just prefer to stay alone and love and miss an image of the lover I want, than love someone who's going to hurt me over and over again...
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chrysromeo Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2007
that makes sense... of course
when there's too much hurting there's no remaining - probably there's a degree of how much we allow someone to harm us before we realize it's no good anymore to keep that relationship
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