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Even when colors turn to gray...
And spring and summer last one day...
Even when flowers fade and die...
And when no bird remains to fly...

Even when soul mates grow apart…
And cold sneaks into every heart…
Even when sleep invades the land...
And sea is swallowed by the sand…

Even when wrong is seen as right…
And love becomes a losing fight…
Even when all will walk away…
I'd like to be the one to stay…
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iiiva Featured By Owner May 20, 2009
:)veryyy nice...
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fletchergull Featured By Owner May 22, 2009  Professional Writer
thanks :blowkiss:
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Thawthan Featured By Owner May 19, 2009
Loved it :) especially the first line :heart:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner May 20, 2009  Professional Writer
thanks a gazillion :worship:
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Lebaneseness Featured By Owner May 18, 2009
dakheeeeel Allah .... sure worth waiting for, you are the Man.
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fletchergull Featured By Owner May 19, 2009  Professional Writer
thanks a lot... :worship:
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Lebaneseness Featured By Owner May 19, 2009
walawoo :thumbsup: :)
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Prtoujours Featured By Owner May 18, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Finally :)

I think that even if you're the one to stay, the cycle will get back to you.. it's a cycle Fletchy.. non?
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fletchergull Featured By Owner May 19, 2009  Professional Writer
when I wrote it, I meant it in a positive way...
now a few days later...
suddenly, the last two sentences:
even when all will walk away
i'd like to be the one to stay

they mean something else, completely different...
and the opposite...
it IS a cycle...
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