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I'm sleeping next to you...
I kiss your closed eyes...
I trace your face with my finger...
I put my ear next to your mouth and hear you breath...
I smile, as I watch you fall asleep, breathing from your mouth...
I'd be looking at you for hours, and you'd be just sleeping, probably dreaming of some of your causes to fight for...
then you'd turn in bed, and i'd be seeing your back now...
I'd smile again, come closer to you...
smell the back of your hair and smile again...
kiss you the smallest kiss on your neck...
you'd tremble a little...
i'd regret the fact that i kissed you...
so I'd whisper in your ear: it's ok, it's just me, go back to sleep...
and you would...
i'd smile again, just for realising that you trusted me...
that you went back to sleep, cos it was just me...
that i wasn't a stranger to you anymore...
i'd go to my side of the bed, lay on my back, my hands under my head...
close my eyes, smile again, and breath so deeply...
and fall asleep...
only when i'll fall asleep, i'll wake up and realise that all the time i was awake and happy...
I was actually dreaming...
of you...
...
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C-Hass Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2008
I love it Wissam !
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2008  Professional Writer
thanks a lot hassaan...
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C-Hass Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2008
Walaw Wissam !
Happy birthday btw.
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2008  Professional Writer
thanks a lot... :)
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Prtoujours Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I read this a long time before... and I still remember it. I had the same dream a couple of nights ago.. and it hurts :)

Write more of these.. I miss your writings :)
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2008  Professional Writer
i wish I can...
I really wish i can...
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corpsebride00 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2007
in a way this made me smile.
i know EXACTLY how u feel, i felt and did it all!! ALL!
i even got goosebumps...

u know, i used to like putting my head on his chest from time to time. his heartbeats made me smile. i used to think: they beat for me...
lol once we jokes about it and he said:
my heart beats say: mirna... mirna... mirna...

hehe...
i love this!
so true and honest...
i just miss him so much right now :(
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2007  Professional Writer
i miss having the head of who I love laying on my chest...
it kills me that I am craving for it, yet have decided not to do it anymore, cos I'll end up even more hurt...
see this missing you feel right now?
it is exactly what I do NOT want to feel anymore, cos I've felt it before...
and that's why I am fighting so hard so i won't fall in love (but I am not succeeding) :(
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corpsebride00 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2007
sigh...
i know..
love is pain... when u mess up, when u break up, when he gets mad at u... when u cnt see him everyday...
it all hurts... :( :( :(
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Alva-V Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2007
:)
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