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this is not a poem...
this is not a note...
this is not a prose...
and surely not a book...

this...
is...
a box...

a box in which I am packing you, so I'd be able to be freed from you...

your smile, that cute smile of yours that was able to make me laugh even when I was so mad at you...
in the box...

your lips, those charming lips I always dreamed of kissing...
in the box...

your hands, those hands I always craved to hold...
in the box...

your eyes, and the multiple ways they glittered whenever you were happy, sad, anxious, nervous, frustrated or in love...
in the box...

your voice, the most melodic voice I have ever heard...
in the box...

your ears
your tears
your nose
your toes
your clumsy hair
your sharp stare

you
All of you
And the part of me that existed because of you...

In the box...
In the bottommost pit...
In the deepest ocean...
In the hottest desert...
Where I'll never find you again...
Where I'll never love you again...
So I'll be set free...
And maybe...
Smiling...
For a change...
:iconladyspeed: this is for you...
I know I promised not to write anymore...
but I just had to...
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:iconhellokittyjuice:
HelloKittyJuice Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2008
:tears:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2008  Professional Writer
it happens :)
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Ladyspeed Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2008
This made me cry cos I feel it all... I think it's time packed my own box too... :sadangel:
Thank you for this you have no idea :hug: :cry:
I'm not gonna say more cos.... cos it needs to sink in.
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2008  Professional Writer
actually, I had written this a while ago...
before deciding not to post anymore...
and wasn't sure I wanted to post it...
cos I wasn't sure I wanted to put everything in a box and burry it in the bottommost part of the ocean...
but when I decided to, I decided not to post anything about this issue anymore...
but then I felt this was about you, about what you should do...
I've already had my peace with my story, and you need to do the same...
when you're not loved, you can't stay and hope the feelings would change cos they will not...
when you're not loved, you just walk away...
and look for another love...
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:iconladyspeed:
Ladyspeed Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2008
thank you for thinking about sharing it...and for sharing it :) :hug:
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:iconfletchergull:
fletchergull Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2008  Professional Writer
:hug:
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Lynnelle Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2008
This is Beautiful!!! :clap:
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:iconfletchergull:
fletchergull Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2008  Professional Writer
mwahs...
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newborn-butterfly Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2008
:hug:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2008  Professional Writer
:blowkiss:
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