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If missing was made of tears,
I'd be flooding everyone...
I'd be washing the earth...
and cleansing it...
with you...

If missing was made of fire,
then Earth would have become another sun...
With me being the core fueling it...
and warming up the souls...
with you...

If missing was made of words,
Then I'd be writing you in every book
that has, is and will ever be written
and making you everyone's muse...

If missing was made of life
then I'd be God
having the Divine elements needed
to shape all new creatures to look...
like you...

but missing is only made of pain,
and that's all I am right now...
and it's ok...
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lolitazizi Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2011
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww hayde raw3aaaaa
ma3 ene ma 7abaytak awal ma fetet bel ghalat 3am pic ta3ol el sayed hasan w beirut bas el poems elle ketebon 3ajad raw3a
keep it up ')
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Professional Writer
my problem is that whenever I talk politics with anyone of any side, I end up being hated...
it's not about me, it's about how ugly politics and politicians in the region are...
I came to a conclusion that says that EVERY politician is rotten, and the proof is what we see in our everyday life...
w heik :)
and thanks a lot for your comments :)
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Prtoujours Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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newborn-butterfly Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2007
:petting: why do you always have to write deep shit that cuts to the core of me and makes me all emotional? i think i'm going to be single shortly.... long distance never works :hug:
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lynnnie Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2008
same here..i hate long distance..
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newborn-butterfly Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2009
Ha. We didn't make it. Broke up, got back together and broke up again.

Your icon is so cute
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lynnnie Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2009
and thank you hehe =}
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lynnnie Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2009
it hurts like shit though..at least for me it does..=(
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newborn-butterfly Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2009
i still think about her every now and then. but it was a really unhealthy relationship, breaking up with her for good was the best thing i could've done for both of us
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2007  Professional Writer
I'm sorry...
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:iconnewborn-butterfly:
newborn-butterfly Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2007
so you should be lol. :glomp: lucky i like you
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WithoutWax Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2007
The poem is symmetrical:
4 paragraphs, of 4 verses each...
then the last one contaning 3...
I couldn't help but to read an ''or not'' hidden somewhere
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2007  Professional Writer
right in the end...
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chrysromeo Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2007
wonderful poem... if poems were made of light, your poem would be a sun by itself... :sun:
:clap:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2007  Professional Writer
:kiss: :blowkiss: :hug:
thank you
your words mean alot to me...
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Lynnelle Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2007
Ok halla2 seriously!!!!! i think this is one of the best you've ever fucking written!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fletchy kiss ekhet el pain!!!!! but it makes a beautiful poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:blowkiss: 2ed ell dinni!!!!!
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2007  Professional Writer
:blowkiss:
pain has kept me silent for a long time
it's about time i wrote something new...
i don't like it alot though
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Lynnelle Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2007
eh bas I love it :hug:

and yes pain has kept you silent khalas ba2a!!!

:hug: :hug: :hug:

anjad I love it!!!!
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2007  Professional Writer
:kiss:
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:iconlynnelle:
Lynnelle Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2007
:XD: :hug:
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Ladyspeed Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2007
I can sort of relate :)
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2007  Professional Writer
Is it hurting you that much? :(
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Ladyspeed Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2007
It stings most of the time and it is bitter and you feel sick- there's this feeling in your stomach it's like you've been punched- but it is permanent- and you so badly wish you could do something about it to either 'fix it' or make it go away or to forget it exists and that you are much better than feeling all these things towards someone that is in a way causing it all- but there is only so much one can do... missing IS made of pain- at least the kind of missing I am experiencing right now I guess- and it fucking hurts and I think you said it best 'and that's all I am right now...and it's ok'.
I guess when it seems like everything has been said and done and when there is not much else left, I can accept that this i the way I am feeling right now and I can take solace in the fact a that (when worst comes to worst): time is the greatest healer.

Lol phew thanks for asking hehe
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2007  Professional Writer
see how good it feels when you empty your feelings in words?
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Ladyspeed Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2007
yeah it does
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2007  Professional Writer
:) good
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