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I'll love you... then what?
I'll see the world in bright extravagant colors?
I'll smell nothing but roses and jasmines?
I'll get to feel your warmth when I'm holding you in my arms?
I'll smile while watching you sleep right next to me?
I'll understand you even when you're silent?
I'll know by heart every curve and detail in your body?
I'll talk and listen to you?
I'll shiver after every kiss?
I'll quiver after every hug?
I'll love every bit of you,
every glimpse of you,
every sound,
every smell,
every feeling of you?
I'll love you?
body and soul?
then what?
















...then you'll leave...
















and what will remain of me?
then what?
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:iconlolitazizi:
lolitazizi Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2011
raheebe hayde ma hek :D hehe 7abbet nice one
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011  Professional Writer
thanks a lot :)
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noOnah Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2008
oops :blushes: just did! stupid laptop ^^;


i really love it :heart:!
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:iconfletchergull:
fletchergull Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2008  Professional Writer
:)
thanks a lot for deeming it worth being faved...
:blowkiss: :worship: :blowkiss:
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noOnah Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2008
why cant i fav??
=/
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:iconfletchergull:
fletchergull Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2008  Professional Writer
I don't have a clue... :S
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zayyanne Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2008
Best thing I've read in a while. :heart:
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:iconfletchergull:
fletchergull Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2008  Professional Writer
I thank you for finding it nice...
:blowkiss: :worship: :blowkiss:
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dejure Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2008   Interface Designer
MAXXXAAAA H

:clap:
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:iconfletchergull:
fletchergull Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2008  Professional Writer
:worship:
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dejure Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2008   Interface Designer
:slow:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2008  Professional Writer
:)
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chrysromeo Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2007
great poem indeed!... couldn't have said it better...
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:iconfletchergull:
fletchergull Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2007  Professional Writer
thanks a lot :bow:
:blowkiss:
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:iconchrysromeo:
chrysromeo Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2007
it's worth it B-)
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Chikaw Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007
Why do you always have to make shed a few tears every time I read one of your masterpieces? :tears:
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:iconfletchergull:
fletchergull Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007  Professional Writer
tears are good
they wash away the pain and the bitterness...
I am glad I made you cry and get rid of some of the pain... :hug:
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LouiseOdier Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2007
where on earth is the problem, flechter? simply enjoy it to the full. :)

susanna
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007  Professional Writer
And the after joy?
the killer after joy?
the loneliness
the pain
& all that crap?
how can I enjoy when I know this will come later on?
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LouiseOdier Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007
hun,

1. do you know what will happened? - no, you do not. or did you tasted him in the past? do you know he is such a shitty person who will hurt you? you are not an auguri, are you?! :o
2. what do you have yet? NOTHING as ONLY suffer.
3. so what is better my dear? i'm thinking you should get the joy, what ever may come in the future.. ;) and well, you should not only think on a destructive future. that's crazy...

susanna
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007  Professional Writer
I've already tried to let go and enjoy the moment TWICE before
and it brought me NOTHING but heartache
I am supposed to learn from my mistakes aren't I?
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LouiseOdier Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007
ok, did YOU made mistakes in the past? did YOU hurt the two others with aim so they leaved you, did you?
no, love brought you not ONLY heartache, you forget the fun and joy you have had too ;)
but yet, you indeed have ONLY suffer and nothing else. where is the sense? this is selfdestruction and crazy.

susanna
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007  Professional Writer
susanna, I will just quote something from a movie called angels in america...
harpor, a woman that was left by her husband says the following:
"when your heart breaks, you should die
but there is still the rest of you
there's your breats and your genitals...
they're amazingly stupid, like babies or faithful dogs...
they don't get it, they just want him...
want him..."

I've been there
it's not fun to go through
and I swore not to allow myself to go through this EVER again...
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LouiseOdier Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007
well, if your genitals the only problem and not your heart and soul: do not cry again and again - do something against it. :) this case is easy... ;)

susann
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007  Professional Writer
omg susanna
you understood the quote in a really really wrong way...
no it's not only the genitals the woman in the movie is talking about... :)
she included everything in her EVEN her genitals...
and since when genitals make anyone write this much poems? HUH?
if there's anything easy in our nowaday life, getting a quick fuck comes first in the list... ;)
and no harpor really loved her husband in the movie... it wasn't only sexual, cos he wasn't even satisfying her sexually...
wait wait... why am I suddenly defending harpor now? :P
I know she was the one I liked the most in the movie, but I think she can defend herself :P
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Prtoujours Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Then nothing...
I apologize for what Im gonna say but..
Then what? then nothing.. menn kounn akalna khara.. we love, they leave.. they come back,we love back, they leave again...
We would always love them, they would always leave, and we feel shitty..:(
Same toxic circle...

I loved it Fletchy :blowkiss:
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007  Professional Writer
dear
when they leave
they can't come back
& if they do
you just kick their lousy arse right through the back door
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Prtoujours Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
:fork: hek badde a3mel :P

:hug: :hug: Take it easy Fletchy.. :hug:
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cyre Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2007
Wow....omg wow, thats really poignant and true...very true. It hits home and devours the facade that love has....*applauds* Very nicely done!
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fletchergull Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007  Professional Writer
:worship:
thank you
it really means a lot to me
thank you
:worship:
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:iconcyre:
cyre Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007
No problem, I like your style of how you make love as it is...instead of how everyone thinks it is.
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Lynnelle Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2007
speechless :tears:

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Chaldemone Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2007
Aww... This is so beautifully written... :tears:
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:iconfletchergull:
fletchergull Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2007  Professional Writer
thank you :hug:
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Chaldemone Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2007
:glomp: You're welcome. :]
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